After designing the drafts of my magazine's front cover, content page and double page spread I emailed the pictures to everybody in my focus group so I could get some feedback, these are 3 of the emails that I received back:
12:08 PM (34 minutes ago)
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Hello!
Just had a quick look at the pictures you sent me, I thought the font cover seemed good, pretty much like most other magazine covers/rock magazine covers and all of the content in it is pretty realistic, the girl looks good as she looks like you're going to model her looking quite glamorous which ties in with the rock aspect however I like the way she has a star around her one eye as it makes her look like she stands out well, and goes with the theme!! Thought the 2 page spread was also cool talking about 'drugs sex and rock an roll' as its a original and recognizable phrase however as it's about your 'star' it makes it interesting to read, its cool!
Luv Olivia Rosee
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1:44 PM (59 minutes ago)
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HIyarrr
thought the front cover was cool with the star, just an idea why don't you make her lips bright red and then outline them with black lip liner, would look real cool and rockish! the girl lieing down on the content page looks wicked, unique! just make sure you keep her looking like a rock girl and not to glamerous xxx Phoebi xxx
| Amy Edwards |
7:17 PM (8 minutes ago)
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Hey, the pics are cool, think they will look good! love the double page with the car and the guitar looks very different and unique, make sure he doesn't smile and wears like black stuff to make him look rock! The way the title takes up so much of the page is cool though, and the style of it like it all overlaps is good. on the front the model looks like it would sell although I'd show a bit more of her chest and clothing and make her wear something that looks like it would be in the sort of rock genre. dont really know what else looks fabbbbbbb, Amy x
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